Taking over me yawn
Bad. Boring.
Sorry to be so blunt, but honestly. I appreciate that you put time into this, and this is probably one of your first flashes, or you are very young. Writing a serious script and posting it to newgrounds is REALLY REALLY challenging, because a serious flash animation can't just survive on being clever. It has to have emotional content. I know that must seem like a crazy statement, considering the police officer's wife kills her lover who killed her husband and kills herself....but I guess that's exactly what I mean. Use subtlety, or go COMPLETELY outrageous. Non of this mediochre stuff. Check out sockbaby. com or salad fingers. anyway, enough.